Comments by Dilated View

  • "For some reason the first visuals that came to my mind were of robot hell from futurama. As for your visuals think the rhythm and rhyme were creative and well used. Nicely done :)"
    Posted by Dilated View on "Inferno" by Rowan
  • "Excellent flow throughout and I like what seemed like the re-telling of an internal journey, like writing from the other side from experience. I think "sale" at the end should be "sell". Much enjoyed, welcome to DP :)"
    Posted by Dilated View on "Inferno" by Rowan
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