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  • "You started off with a woe is me, metaphor and then you almost turned it into something beautiful but, you drove it into the ground with a wow, big surprise, everyone wants to live kind of thing. The language didn't intrigue. No one knows how to die. You can pick how you die but, know one knows how to die. Just because you hurt doesn't make you an authority or even entitled."
    Posted by Phalanx on "Everyone in pain knows how to die..." by Storm
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