Comments by Lawless Fighter
- "I really connected this to two works of mine, "Winter's Silence" for the first part and "The Party" for the second part, I agree in the winter's portion of sensory images and the second party really got me thinking in the sense of a party. while reading that second part i could see a young man wandering through a party where everyone was laughing but him and he just walked around gathering up foods and drinks and pretending to have fun. . .beautifully done."
Posted by Lawless Fighter on "Thin ice" by palenoble
- "The very first few lines make me think of the englishmen during WWII. . prim, proper, arrogant in dress and style yet they found it in their hearts to tell people off and then later ask them for assitance. . beautifully written for a non-english born worm childe. . .keep it up! ;)"
Posted by Lawless Fighter on "Opusculum Nocturne" by palenoble
