Comments by Guillotine
- "Also - as a side note, allcaps titles are hard to read. Unless it's an anger poem or something of the like I suggest you reevaluate the use of such, especially when this poem is meant to be melancholy."
Posted by Guillotine on "Shimmering Sliver" by brokenbandagedbetter
- "A few good images here, but a lot of this was staggered and hard to establish a rythym with this. If you were attempting to create a dystrophy it may be worth expanding your vocabulary."
Posted by Guillotine on "Shimmering Sliver" by brokenbandagedbetter
