Comments by xserratedsoulx
- "beautiful. the only advice i have for you is to fix up this one stanza--the one that begins 'now living'...it just didn't seem to fit quite right to me. if you don't mind cristism. the rest, my darling, was astounding!
~lauren~"
Posted by xserratedsoulx on "I Will Always Bleed Ink" by Fading_Smile
