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- ""... I mercilessly hurl gasoline into the conflagration" Fucking awesome line. Same goes for the bit about ten thousand tiny wounds and one of them winning someday. Suicide and self loathing are two of my favorite topics to write and read about because it's really cathartic. So, yeah, awesome piece... Also, BLOOD AND FIRE!!! >:DDDDD "
Posted by Queazenart on "My Own" by Chimauron
- "Whoa you are really hard on yourself. This is awesome crafting. The word choices are brilliant. Give yourself a pat on the back, you deserve it after all that. Great Limericks too, I should add. Thanks for sharing :)"
Posted by blue angel on "My Own" by Chimauron
- "Yes.. Here is someone feeling that way almost all the time.. I can relate to those feelings that you perfectly described.. I have been fighting a fight against me since I can remember and I know how it feels to die a little more every day.. The imagery evoked from your words are overwhelming.. "My soul is the battlefield".. That part touches me very deep.. Thank you very much for sharing! :)"
Posted by Unknown on "My Own" by Chimauron
- "I could practically feel all of this while reading. Your word choice makes me swoon. Right on!"
Posted by Unknown on "LIAR" by Chimauron
- "No tomatoes coming at you from my direction mate, I thought this was a pretty damn good effort, with some choice lines all the way through."
Posted by Ashteroth on "Argument" by Chimauron
- "holy fuck dude, this is the best vivid poem i have read in this site, its great, you are a great writer keep on"
Posted by Unknown on "A Soldier's Death" by Chimauron
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