Comments by All Members
- "whoa cruis!! ".... lost forever in shades of grey and shades of black, shadows of night and shadows of light.." sounds so creative. I like this one a lot. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed it. :) __cheers__"
Posted by Unknown on ""Dreams"" by crius42
- "The shadows at times can be more true to you than others. Scary but true none the less, write on and thanks for sharing."
Posted by Gray Vision on "My favorite place" by crius42
- "This piece strikes hard, even though I didn't experience it first hand, I felt it as I took a stroll in your shoes, while reading this piece. The hurt is unbearable, even though you attempted to convey it through what words you could muster, I'm sure there's alot more that you could have talked about. Thank you for sharing something so personal, great write and take care of yourself."
Posted by Gray Vision on "Better off Dead" by crius42
- "Lost...shades of grey and black..familiar..shadows..our constant lovers..I like to look at the world in sepia and muse at the darkness of it all...eventually light manages to filter through the cracks of one's veneer.."
Posted by Ceolwulf on ""Dreams"" by crius42
- "Thank you very much..I appreciate any info and/or help I can get. never really studied how to write..all I do is well....write. "
Posted by crius42 on "Better off Dead" by crius42
- "That's so sad..sometimes the pain is too great to bare so we see no alternative. It flowed well. Maybe work on the structure a little but other than it was a good write."
Posted by Rowan on "Better off Dead" by crius42
