Comments by All Members
- "Ouch. Damn, now that was an ending I was not expecting. Damn fine write. ~b"
Posted by blue on "Sub Rosa" by atzi
- "like holding the hand of your farther when you know hes going to hit you... i really like this.. a selfless act of self distruction"
Posted by serotonin lost on "Sub Rosa" by atzi
- "i agree with alan.... i think we put too much thought and faith in romanticism.... nothing is ever perfect, but things are usually never so bleak either... good luck kiddo, you'll need it, but try to not let it get you down."
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Sub Rosa" by atzi
- "This was a wonderfully collected write. I love the part about the sky, how you just drop the weight of pain onto the clouds themselves, even if just for a moment. That situation indeed sucks, but at least your writing expresses it well. =) "
Posted by Err0r on "Sub Rosa" by atzi
- ""I have five minutes to get myself together. To smile."..I know how hard that can be..this was expressed perfectly"
Posted by Unknown on "Sub Rosa" by atzi
- "That fucking sucks. Not the poem. No not at all. It was very well concieved, and well portrayed. But the situation its self eats cock. "
Posted by Alanarchy on "Sub Rosa" by atzi
- "Wierd stuff. I like the You belong to her, to them line. was nice to see those words used more . Wellcome to DP"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "Sub Rosa" by atzi
