Comments by All Members
- "I actually considered faving this bit don't have the room. I feel like I don't need to say more than that because I very very rarely add anything to favorites."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "All my tears" by torn_beauty
- "Ouch...Always hard to take but one of those lessons. This reminds me of stories I'd hear when I was a Uni student. Short, to the point and very well done."
Posted by carlosjackal on "wasted kisses" by torn_beauty
- "Really impressive. I love the subtlety of writers who can whisper their pain. Thk you for sharing this"
Posted by Adagios on "heart thought" by torn_beauty
- "I liked it, I believe I captured your idea a feeling that is one hard to explain. The playing with words very creative, Keep it UP!!! I would like to see more!"
Posted by Unknown on "Rusty words." by torn_beauty
- "Never is a very long distance in time, belief can take you even further. I could feel the disgust and contempt as I read. The pain only makes success that much sweeter. Thanx for sharing! "
Posted by Void Vortex on "heart thought" by torn_beauty
- "every misstep, misbeat, arrhythmic rupture of pattern, of tempo and pace, brings the pulse closer to flatlining on love forever, maybe. Just gets harder and harder to believe. thanks. "
Posted by The Dybbuk on "heart thought" by torn_beauty
- "..sounds like you need to put out that fire your valentine set in your house before everything in your life is wasted and burnt to the point where you cant touch anything withiout feeling it fall between your fingers like grains of sadn...."
Posted by Unknown on "wasted kisses" by torn_beauty
- "The title and first stanza drew me into a little dark fantasy world
And I really loved this line - "Hope abandoned me on the evening breeze"
Thanks for sharing this"
Posted by Unknown on "Winter rain" by torn_beauty
- "Solace and solitude walk arm and arm. But without the acute fear of things loved- lost, you are doing yourself a cold detriment. No love no pain, but it's double sided, because being without love is also a kind of pain. Interesting. I also loved the alliterations. "
Posted by Hands_Around_My_Throat on "Winter rain" by torn_beauty
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