Comments by tonebone

  • "I liked the whole idea or the thought of the piece, it invoked an anger many of us have regarding the bullshit we see and hear every day spouting from the mouths of those in a position of authority. I had a hard time with the flow of it and thought if more attention were given to line breaks it would make a good poem even better. Attention to line breaks (in my opinion) naturally force the reader to stop at strategic points and lend meter and flow. Anyway I really liked what you have to say...I like your screen name also, it goes perfectly with this piece."
    Posted by tonebone on "ever hear the phrase...." by muckraker
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