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  • "I will miss your writing if you leave. please stay and continue to grace us with your words "
    Posted by River Lily on "...Endgame" by SolApathy
  • "I haven't been here for a long time and yet I've read many of your works, pretty impressive stuff. Here's to hoping you've attained magnum opus status, and if not, may your pursuit continue unabated. Cheers."
    Posted by LIFEINVADER on "...Endgame" by SolApathy
  • "Surely it’s just a bittersweet distraction from reality, but how sweet are those moments of silence as short-lived as they are? I enjoyed envisioning this piece in my head, thank you for taking me there!"
    Posted by IamZero on "...Toke" by SolApathy
  • "The choice of color adds another layer to this. I really enjoyed the tempo of this. "
    Posted by Drea on "...Toke" by SolApathy
  • "The stars will never die, nor disappear. You may lose sight of them, but they are still there. Pollution, of any sort, can be combated. You just have to try. I like this piece, because it is thought provoking and entirely soulful. Well wrought."
    Posted by Skye on "...Scars of the stars" by SolApathy
  • "I like this, because oddly, and like me, you've a tilted rhyme structure here. I'll take it, and walk away with it. I liked what you put down, as depressing as it is. "
    Posted by Skye on "...Core" by SolApathy
  • "I haven't been here in a long time, I recognized your user name (I don't recognize many) so I clicked your posted work. As I read this one, each line hit me harder than the one before it. I relate closely to the pain your pen etches here, loss is a terrible thing that consumes from every direction. My best hope is that the sharing of ourselves here on these pages will enable us in some way to find at least a small amount of release... even if only for a fleeting moment......... ~Ace~"
    Posted by Peyton1 on "...Core" by SolApathy
  • "It may be the same story but the complexity of man is endless. Your work always proves so. This piece did not disappoint, beautifully penned. "
    Posted by IamZero on "...Gloom" by SolApathy
  • "I feels like you meter your rhymes to the depths of depression, like you're trying to aim for a soul. Well placed, archer."
    Posted by Skye on "...Gloom" by SolApathy
  • "The emotional depth expressed through the words is truly touching, but the rhyme, the rhyme is truly impressive, cheers."
    Posted by LIFEINVADER on "...Gloom" by SolApathy
  • "Well I didn't exactly copy it, I just highlighted it but yea. The irony of this conversation does not escape me, either ;)"
    Posted by Skye on "...Lost" by SolApathy
  • "Black text on a dark background does not read well yo. It took me a second."
    Posted by Skye on "...Lost" by SolApathy
  • "I don’t think we ever really know how you just have to put one foot in front of the other and move forward it’s not something we are taught or we can learn, just gotta know when it’s the right time to unstick yourself. Beautifully penned melancholy piece and lovely image, the sun shines with warmth and hope and the water healing. Hugs "
    Posted by River Lily on "...Reflections of sins, envisioned " by SolApathy
  • "Rhyme is a form of expression, and so well does it do when it's needed... and especially when it's not. I like the way you wrote this, it seems to embrace creativity at the edge of a certain type of... nihilism, maybe. The sketch belies its own creation, too. A weird way to brought in. Well written, indeed."
    Posted by Skye on "...Graphite" by SolApathy
  • "Interesting imagery, it resonates within me leaving a deep emotional impact, very beautifully captures the ebb and flow of life's journey. Cheers."
    Posted by LIFEINVADER on "...Graphite" by SolApathy
  • "Why is it that we try to rhyme, when least of all those assist our time? Hmm, seems a wicked wonder. Please don't ponder. Lovely and well written, dear."
    Posted by Skye on "...Poisoned Melody " by SolApathy
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