Comments by jaunty pill
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I also like the ( of course ). Almost like a conscious-throw outloud. A little moment of clarity we didn't need to see , But why not. Wonderful word choices as well here. Again , Nice work."
Posted by jaunty pill on "The next one's a winner" by purr_verse
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Quirky. And I know what a poem turns into in the pockets of someone else..Would you like to know? Whitewash. That's right. Unique and absolutely well-done. This is a keeper indeed."
Posted by jaunty pill on "The next one's a winner" by purr_verse
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I also must mention that " silverbright " is a lovely combination...Which I often find in a lot of your work. It is nice to read you again. Often you leave me crippled. "
Posted by jaunty pill on "crush" by purr_verse
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I just wonder if it is a sin to indulge in such poetry today. ;) You always know how to strike a cord..Something near and dear to my own work. A female me maybe? Maybe not. Love it. Change nothing."
Posted by jaunty pill on "crush" by purr_verse
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On the other hand , This can be taken to a literal end. A shock from the past ebbing back into our future..Wasting away the barren flesh that wears so thin upon us all. Like baby fat or the rinsed stuffing of an old chair."
Posted by jaunty pill on "Ignis Fatuus" by purr_verse
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The first stanza literally knocked my socks off. And not only that , But you did it with a talented pen. Your wording is original and , Somehow , Mellow and still alive. It invokes a clever appeal...A tragic frame caught in beauty. An eruption."
Posted by jaunty pill on "Ignis Fatuus" by purr_verse
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An ending that rocks the reader into an almost twisted silence. This poems contains some of the most creative words I've ever seen used in a piece. This is reflective and hauntingly. Welcome to my bookmarks. I can't wait to read more."
Posted by jaunty pill on "Love's Vespine Allegory" by purr_verse
