Comments by Carmina Gitana
- "I think the first two lines are marvelous. But, I'll be honest, it feels like the rest of it was put together just to turn those first two into a full-fledged poem. I'd keep working on this, it has the potential to be a really meaningful piece. (Hope you're OK with a critique - I mean well.)"
Posted by Carmina Gitana on "I spent too much time among the shoreline." by Armor for your life
