Comments by All Members
- "There are so many quotable lines in this piece, but I think my favorite is, "i think i dreamed you
once long ago
but i don't remember." Great piece! Ciao, Steve "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Taylor on Probabtion" by Jonas
- "Totally worthy of PotD. The visuals throughout were top notch and the content raw and honest. Felt myself being drug line to line like some amphetamine flashback, where I made every promise in the world but follow up on none of them, where the morning after, typically days later, feels like the movie Momento. Very nicely done,"
Posted by Dilated View on "the red whore" by Jonas
- "Very thought provoking. Time does fly and seems to get quicker as you go. Great write. JD"
Posted by Just Dave on "untitled" by Jonas
- "A very touching yet beautiful write. Rebs:)."
Posted by Unknown on "herb" by Jonas
- "willingness to change... I like that! ~worm~"
Posted by worm on "halo" by Jonas
- "i love your use of words and how you painted an image well done i really loved this peace"
Posted by Domenta on "universe" by Jonas
- "I love the imagery and flow of this piece. I enjoyed reading it when you first posted it, but I had nothing worthy to say by way of comment... Well, I find I am still lacking, so I will just go ahead and tell you that I loved it and leave it at that... :) "
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "universe" by Jonas
- "a masterful stroke of the pen! I'm glad I stopped by to read! Kudos! ~worm~"
Posted by worm on "universe" by Jonas
- "I hate to come off as a groupie, but I have been waiting for a new post from you for a very long time and I literally squealed when I got the notification. You did not disappoint. This is everything. I mean that in the context of the subject matter and in the context of your masterful pen. "
Posted by Amaryllis on "universe" by Jonas
- "Well done! Especially impressive you got it in one take. Great to see/hear something new from you! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "agoraphobia " by Jonas
- "I'm so glad to see you posting anything again! Welcome back :)"
Posted by Drea on "agoraphobia " by Jonas
- "This is one of the most wonderful comments I've ever recieved. The last several years have been fairly dry for me from an artistic perspective(they've been great from an adult, utilitarian perspective). The long, dark night of my soul seems to be ending and I am inspired again. Your words here are like a rising wind on a brush fire.
For such a long time I've thought "what's the point" when it comes to writing poetry... Well, your comment is the answer and it's a good one. Many heartfelt thanks."
Posted by Jonas on "lovesick" by Jonas
- "Possibly one of the all time greatest poems about a prostitute ever written just for its sheer honesty."
Posted by carlosjackal on "the red whore" by Jonas
- "Just the finest outburst and the title fits fucking perfectly with the content and message and.....the feeling of expression on display. You need to return, you fucker."
Posted by carlosjackal on "self-conscious" by Jonas
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