Comments by KittyStryker
- "sometimes i find it hard to say what i'm feeling when i'm awake, too. sometimes, though, you don't have to...? i don't know. but this poem got to me somehow. P.S. i don't want you to die either."
Posted by KittyStryker on "exploded head caricature" by Jonas
- "mm... i love the poems you write about your travels- you make me want to hitchhike so i can better know the people i meet."
Posted by KittyStryker on "josh bones" by Jonas
- "This is fantastic... there's a Marge Piercy poem I should send you sometime- this reminds me of it. "
Posted by KittyStryker on "i am a slave" by Jonas
- "i can't seem to write the comment i feel in my heart... i can't put it in words. this is a beautiful poem, and i feel it in a wordless, understanding sort of way. "
Posted by KittyStryker on "naked in a chair" by Jonas
- "i'm amazed this has only one comment. this was heart wrenching... i'm sorry you feel the way you do."
Posted by KittyStryker on "dross" by Jonas
- "i chuckled a bit at this too... simply cause i've seen that happen while i've been sitting inside coffeeshops... this is a perfectly written description of the process."
Posted by KittyStryker on "two modern boys" by Jonas
- "hehe... i can laugh... and did, more wryly than anything else. at least you aren't the only boy who does that... the foxy ones get everything, and the rest of us, well, we have to make ourselves useful."
Posted by KittyStryker on "feminine double standard" by Jonas
- "this is beautiful. i know the feeling too well... in fact... i don't think i should've read this poem."
Posted by KittyStryker on "a napkin scrap" by Jonas
- "this made a tear come up right as it made me smile. mm. glad you've seen that glimmer, hon- you've got a shine that scatters across the sky."
Posted by KittyStryker on "glimmer" by Jonas
- "you know... this doesn't seem, to me, like you're bothered by being alone. sometimes, nature is the best company. it always listens and never offers silly advice."
Posted by KittyStryker on "to wander" by Jonas
- "you know... for me, this is almost hopeful, simply because i know you know the void i'm living in as well as i do. i'm trying to tell myself it's not true... but it is. it is."
Posted by KittyStryker on "skipping stones" by Jonas
- "hehe- i read everything you're written lately, and this, THIS is, i feel, the best. you're darling when you're a brat. :)"
Posted by KittyStryker on "self-conscious" by Jonas
- "this... alarmed me and troubled me a lot. which is good- poetry should be able to crawl under the skin and leave a mark. i always wished i could fix it all for you... but i can't, so i won't try. ::hug::"
Posted by KittyStryker on "shit smelling party favors" by Jonas
- "the people you desribe remind me somewhat of the animal people in "Someplace to be Flying"... beautifully written..."
Posted by KittyStryker on "seventeen years" by Jonas
- "a lot. totally and completely... his body being is the channeling of poetry into tissue, skin, and bones. it reflects in his eyes. :)"
Posted by KittyStryker on "running dog" by Jonas
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