Comments by All Members

"Friends, ACTUAL friends can not be replaced nor forgotten. That which many call "friends" are simply acquaintances or worse. I like this write, because it feels like an ode to those who are actually friends and not just in fair weather. Thanks for sharing. "
Posted by Skye on "It's Been Some Time" by SirEnders

"i think many can unfortunately relate...but hang in there..it is said these things build character."
Posted by natalie on "Strongly Fragile" by SirEnders

"Positively amazing. You captured the very essence of pain in stages, phenomenally. Keep writing. Please."
Posted by ADevilParadigm on "Left In Memory" by SirEnders

"This was so so beautiful. So much pain and heartache woven together with beautiful words of a love so missed. Amazing metaphor, an absolute masterpiece. "
Posted by Unknown on "Her, Revealed. " by SirEnders

"So much pain and sadness. U are worth more than this...u should be loved and treated the same way as u treat others...if this wasn't given to u then u are better off without her and she's done u a favour. Your young, cute and talented, have patience my friend, the right one will come"
Posted by Unknown on "I'm So Stupid.." by SirEnders

"Thoroughly enjoyed this. Great word choice. The whole piece painted a clear picture of emotion. Keep it up!"
Posted by Unknown on "Downward Spiral" by SirEnders

"Good rhymes and word choice. Very expressive and to the point. Some of the best things about poetry. Keep up the good work. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Downward Spiral" by SirEnders

"We think change starts within self for self. This helped us handle outside forces better. Being rejected or used will still hurt but we can handle it. We've learned to pat ourselves on the back."
Posted by I IS ME on "I'm So Stupid.." by SirEnders

"one day soon you'll realize it never could've worked, and you're better off without her. been there a couple times myself. thank you for sharing."
Posted by Patches on "I'm So Stupid.." by SirEnders

"Congrats Sweetie! Well deserved. Love it!ðŸ’šðŸ’šðŸ’šðŸ’š"
Posted by Willow Wept on "Her, Revealed. " by SirEnders

"I won?! Thank you so much, it is a great honor to have won! Have a great night, I hope you and everyone have a great day!"
Posted by SirEnders on "Her, Revealed. " by SirEnders

"A gut-wrenching gem, bathed in sorrows as this writer wishes of no tomorrow... This was an extremely hard contest to judge. Every single poem met all my metrics and broke far beyond my best expectations. Every entrant should know that their work was #1 in my eyes... Asas only one can be picked this lonely night.... Congratulations SirEnders!"
Posted by SolApathy on "Her, Revealed. " by SirEnders

"Best of luck with the contest SE and sadly, there are two sides to every story. Cherish what was; it's part of who we are (or were) and cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Her, Revealed. " by SirEnders

"I followed the colors of fall and it "Lead" to winter . As pristine as a morgue and just as cold ."
Posted by midnights voice on "Great Gloomy Hall" by SirEnders

"Well, damn.... We judge ourselves and dish out our own punishment according, sometimes, to what others say and think. Our lives traveling that loop of darkness over and over. Remember, you can be whatever you want if you put your mind to it. I know you can. Love the poem!ðŸ’šðŸ’šðŸ’šðŸ’š"
Posted by Willow Wept on "At The King's Mercy " by SirEnders

"The subject of loss is palpable. It's beautifully crafted, given the AABB rhyme scheme, astoundingly worded; all things about this is fantastic."
Posted by TheJestyrIsHere on "Her Oath, I'll Keep. " by SirEnders

"I could feel a song brewing from this. Very dark and flowed really well."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "I Am An Alpha" by SirEnders

"You are indeed an Alpha of a wonderful kind, darlin'. Rebs:)."
Posted by Unknown on "I Am An Alpha" by SirEnders

"Nicely done and written with much heartfelt devotion at a loss too great for words, almost. Cheers SE! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Her Oath, I'll Keep. " by SirEnders

"I generally don't care for AABB rhyme schemes but I think this works pretty well."
Posted by Cassette on "Her Oath, I'll Keep. " by SirEnders

"As I've said before, haunting and beautiful. She was so fortunate in you, darlin'. Rebs:)."
Posted by Unknown on "Her Oath, I'll Keep. " by SirEnders

"Sweetie...damn...life is hard that's for sure and people are assholes and Fucktardians. That should be a real term. If all those other words ("ghetto talk")are in the damn dictionary that should be. Anyhow, I can't say people get any better with age but we learn to stay to ourselves. Friends are Fair-weathered and Family never seems to be blood. Yet we are wrong to lash out when someone fucks us over....Bullshit! That is why we Write. We write, they live...maybe. Stay strong sweetie.ðŸ’šðŸ’šðŸ’šðŸ’š"
Posted by Willow Wept on "Up In Flames" by SirEnders

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