Comments by All Members

"Wow. This makes me feel so much emotion."
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "My dire diary" by Melancholic VIncent

"Too brilliant to dislike. I love this."
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Phoenix Nest" by Melancholic VIncent

"Brilliant use of free-style altering meter. Sort of like a goth Eliot."
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Single-Bullet Theory" by Melancholic VIncent

"Ha ha ha we like this one. Great piece"
Posted by I IS ME on "Single-Bullet Theory" by Melancholic VIncent

"Wow man that was INTENSE as fuck. I was with u every step of the way. Brilliant ink!"
Posted by Unknown on "Single-Bullet Theory" by Melancholic VIncent

"This was a ride of suspense definitely enjoyed!! I'm gonna stand in line again ;)"
Posted by darkendomme on "System Overload" by Melancholic VIncent

"We really enjoyed this one took the time to show it to myself. Thanks"
Posted by I IS ME on "System Overload" by Melancholic VIncent

"Very original. Thank you for putting the effort into creating something brilliant. "
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "System Overload" by Melancholic VIncent

"I understand how you feel... I know its hard to have to live with something like this, especially since, there basically is no one to blame. Its just an inevitable and irreversible downward spiral, no escape whatsoever, and that really fucks up the whole thing....its a terrible thing to live with. I like the way you related your mother to a machine...running and working, but no soul, no life. Deteriotated completely. But one thing...no matter how you feel, you are not an abomination my sweet big brother, youll never be :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Motherless Abomination" by Melancholic VIncent

"Yeah...we all get punished when we do bad, bad stuff...half humanity could go to Hell/Hades/Gehenna/[INSERT RELIGION]. your imagery on this one was...different from what I'm used to from you...nonetheless i love it. you pull it off well"
Posted by Unknown on "Crimson Blood" by Melancholic VIncent

"I like it ^^ its like, that acidic, gnawing, bitter feeling that one gets when he doesnt get what he wants and is all like "AARGH""
Posted by Unknown on "Lacerating Rage" by Melancholic VIncent

"You showed me this one earlier... i feel again that i have to say just how incredibly this is written. Every detail of the battlefield and its deranging effects coming to its full glory...or disglory.. I loved its depth and its obvious that alot of effort has been put in writing this"
Posted by Unknown on "The Great War" by Melancholic VIncent

"..I do know the feeling all too well"
Posted by Unknown on "What Killers are made of" by Melancholic VIncent

"Through knowing you and your pain i can understand and feel every single word in this poem. In some way you could see this as a synopsis of your past.. nonetheless, the pain has not been cut short in the process. You brought it out beautifully, and your bitter melancholy strikes me...... And.. 'the greenish in your eyes'? That's cute ^^"
Posted by Unknown on "Next of Kin" by Melancholic VIncent

"Thanks for this :) It's like I could really feel how you were feeling about this. Really... thanks so much... I can't remember him, I just... sometimes wonder what would become of him if he was still alive."
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Where art thou my brother?" by Melancholic VIncent

"Yeah, i know I'm generally a crybaby, but not over poetry. And honestly, this made me shed a few tears. I dont know your brother, nor did i see his death, but ever since you told me about the accident and about his death, I have felt incredibly sad for him. I don't know. maybe its because I have this sympathy for you that i feel some of it towards him as well... *takes a deep breath* im okay. Condolences to your brother.."
Posted by Unknown on "Where art thou my brother?" by Melancholic VIncent

"Yes you did, and you did it flawlessly *one-person standing ovation*"
Posted by Unknown on "System Overload" by Melancholic VIncent

"Took me a while to do this, it's a lot hard to do this. Not my type of poetry but I think I nailed it "
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "System Overload" by Melancholic VIncent

"Yay, a biscuit!! *eats imaginary biscuit and wonders next where did it go*"
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Metamorphosis" by Melancholic VIncent

"It sounds so cool and creepy and every time i read this i want to write a kinda 'cyber'-like poem too but i goddamn don't know how! >.< anyways, you do know that i love this poem lots and lots and lots :3 I enjoy how that tension builds up more and more and then, suddenly, dead."
Posted by Unknown on "System Overload" by Melancholic VIncent

"It's a beautiful piece and a true philosophy. we do change, and we cant go back as we are forcefully pushed forward by the wall of time, relentlessly, no warning signs, just straight into the deep. Great, great write :) you deserve a biscuit *"
Posted by Unknown on "Metamorphosis" by Melancholic VIncent

"I loved it, very well written. â™¥"
Posted by Lil Demon Lady on "Single-Bullet Theory" by Melancholic VIncent

"Thanks! You really made me see the value of this poem :D"
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Single-Bullet Theory" by Melancholic VIncent

"Friggin' fucking awesome. I enjoyed how at many points the tension builds up and then slides down, going up a second time, sliding down again. and directly relating cold feelings, death and pain to characteristics of the bullet...very enjoyable read ^^"
Posted by Unknown on "Single-Bullet Theory" by Melancholic VIncent

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