Comments by Jonas Robinson
- "Beautiful I enjoyed this because of the half-rhymes that made it much better than normal rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and congrats. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Undeclared" by freudian-slip
- "Nice ending. It surprised me, I almost thought it would be erotic, though it was comical. Thank you for sharing, and congrats. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Mr Flatulance" by silentninja
- "So moving. I found so much comfort in reading this, because I haven't found many love poems which can express the depth of the beautiful ironies, and the depth of darkness and its beauties. Thank you for sharing, and congrats. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "StarDust" by Echoes of Orpheus
- "Deep. I enjoyed this because of the rhyming scheme and of word choice. Thank you for sharing. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "juggernaut" by Nuada
- "Yes, I love Silver. I enjoyed this because of its symbolism of elements in conveyance of different types of people. Thank you for sharing. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "Silver shines" by sIo
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