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- "If someone were to ask me what being drunk was like I could just let them read this and know that they were getting the very best advice on the subject...but most " drunk" s aren't this well captured. This is more like an expert in drunk s that has talked to a hundred drunks and written a poem conglomerate of all the best parts of each one. Awesome."
Posted by syzygy on "Flat Red Shoes" by BeautifulCalamity
- "This is wonderful! This blew me away. The style was unique, the words were beautiful, the flow was just amazing and everything fit together perfectly! The first stanza was enough to be a wonderful peice, but this is just amazing. Well done!"
Posted by Unknown on "To Choke On Glitter With Perfect Eyes.." by BeautifulCalamity
- "Wow wow and wow again ... so much said and soo real in the words and behind the ...little mistake on a tabletop of someotherperfect ... just love it. Thanks for sharing it this ....a humble word-lover"
Posted by Emma Tenebrae on "Flat Red Shoes" by BeautifulCalamity
- ""[Everyday I write it out]
Wishing sometimes that I couldn't feel that windless whisper behind my neck,
your shallow tongue,
fingers dazing my lungs. .
.you.
Every minute there is revolution
Every minute we trip through frantic wars"...............the gritted teeth want in this, the devotion, the deluge of passion and strength and artistry. .. . . .beautifully rendered and tormented in a way. ~~"
Posted by Unknown on "Burning in the Mysterious Sway" by BeautifulCalamity
- ""and you're all poets out there,
so you feel my language as though
it was your own body..
dreaming, weaving. . making love." Jesus. I could have worn out my quotation mark key putting down all the lines that moved me throughout this. Honest and uncalculating, you layed this out wonderfully and broke my heart in the process. Beautiful."
Posted by Dilated View on "Vulgar.Hands.Undress" by BeautifulCalamity
- "I suppose there's not really much more that I can add that your legion of appreciators haven't already expressed ten times better than I ever could...but dare I say I too search; and I too dream--as for the poet you speak of however...I think I just found her---bacchus/poetnumber213"
Posted by Unknown on "To Choke On Glitter With Perfect Eyes.." by BeautifulCalamity
- "wickedly beautiful, poetic brillance!
you just couldn't help but love it
way to write!
ears/Seattle
I think of my favorite freedoms
in dark writing is that..we as
dark writers can "ply" the layers
and textures "not" enslaved to the
structures or formats as some of
the other genre's are...this is
a fine example of that...the writer
allowing the ink...to...Free, consume,
control, and release!
loved it!"
Posted by Ears2hearyou on "Vulgar.Hands.Undress" by BeautifulCalamity
- "..the exp[anse of this..the wider than wide view ands cope, breadth. . .. leaves me even wider.eyed and head.tilted. . . . such stilled and captured thoughts among such rarities of emotional viewings. . .. indeed, a pretty pretty write....and the end....succinct and swiftly kissed."
Posted by Unknown on "Cross-Heart Promises & Forever" by BeautifulCalamity
- "i am humbled. i once wrote these lines: once the gilded lily starts to wither/love breaks down like toxins in the liver
i realize now why the lines did not belong in one of my poems- the moment i
grasped the point your poem illustrates- about the love that does not die, which is the love of the very essence of a soul, dead alive, material or ephemeral. an object in abstract in or out of context. if i wither and turn to dust, my own essence will be done justice for this poem was written for each and every creation of art and it celebrates each individual artist for their purpose of being in keeping dreams alive. *applause*"
Posted by lovechild on "To Choke On Glitter With Perfect Eyes.." by BeautifulCalamity
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