Comments by Candy Cain

  • "Eh, this one was more or less just rhyme than any kind of natural structure. The choice for progression has always ended me in similar places to the beginnings. Kinda sick of the suddenness of the stops and starts"
    Posted by Candy Cain on "the cycle of it. a möbius dream." by Candy Cain
  • "Oh, thank you for the honest feedback. You're very good at reading the intents I put into things and I appreciate that. Would you suggest I change anything to make the imagery more relatable? Despite the tone of the words, it was actually written to a fast pace, cheery, campfire tune in major, which may have affected it this way."
    Posted by Candy Cain on "Atop the Land of Diamonds/To Sink or not to Swim" by Candy Cain
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