Comments by Purposelessness
- "Thanks guys, I always imagine how much more pure these drunken experiences could be when sober. But would they occur at all if all parties were sober?"
Posted by Purposelessness on "Sober" by Purposelessness
- "Thank you. The idea wasn't a haiku at the start, but ended up making it into one. I'd prefer no title actually and I didn't want to call it "Untitled", so I've thought about it and went with just ".""
Posted by Purposelessness on "." by Purposelessness
- "Thanks for the comparison to Jim Morrison, there's a first time for everything. Maybe I could write more with him in mind. Thanks :)"
Posted by Purposelessness on "The End" by Purposelessness
- "Thanks for commenting, I appreciate any criticisms, as it helps me to improve and gain another perspective into my writing. I'd like to portray some monotony with the rhyming in stanza 2, while still showing that there are wondrous things to accomplish (according to others). Altogether that stanza is meant to show what there is available to apply myself to - and that is the very reason why I choose to do nothing. Not one thing. I was going for a show of how we are given a 'standard' for what we are expected to aim for, what we are expected to achieve - and how it's just rubbish. And why not throw a little millennial apathy right in with it. Thanks for your comment and I'm always down for some technical analysis and coaching :)"
Posted by Purposelessness on "Purposelessness" by Purposelessness
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