Comments by blue
- "I'm not fond of rhyme unless it's used lyrically, but you kept me reading, which is a high compliment from me, horrible as it may sound.... the "paint the sky with polka dots..." line was fantastic and felt on a personal level... well thought out write here. Though there's one misspelling "..if *you're* not afraid to feel" ~b"
Posted by blue on "Dream Of Me" by maliceman