Comments by blue
- "Consider this an attempt to cultivate something like an objective intuition...: Nocturnal hued sand, darkness, darkness, the lisp and lap of wavering waters, oceans of dense darkness, darkness, the incontrovertible depths of the unknown. Great stores of molecular motion! …flickering and faltering upon their endless transmutations, interior species of light, orbiting, orbiting, gravitationally bound to such renowned hearts that called out from within. Called out and never left; sustenance of soul. And, like a brush stroke across the landscape, a seemingly frivolous fog; the howling of history emerging from it’s arterial winds. Wheeling round, we find a geologic curiosity, petal, pistil and stamen perk their bony heads, full of wonderment and wile, a juxtaposition of fervent feeling. And suddenly, out of the soil of their abode, rising forcefully like the white walls of Gondor… the towering cliffs of equanimity, sure to tempt one’s heart toward humility. Straining with upward glance one can see, or more closely feel a vast arboreal wilderness heaving itself upon the world, and trickling through its kaleidoscope of leaves the distinct laughter of youth. Playful, like call and response it rises and falls, an invitation that beckons. Come, come, we have being yet to discover. Celestial bodies, slow burn of stars, galactic agape, how can you possibly speak my name? Godhead of the universe, eternal internal flow, whispers into your dream state… am I not all that you ever are…? ~b "
Posted by blue on "iii. mythos of interiority" by Feral
- "…I sense something deeply dire here. I keep coming back to this, and can’t quite shake this feeling… that something immense is moving, heaving behind these words, unseen yet piercingly felt, something dangerous, something deadly. Despite the uplifting of the final line, this weighs so heavily upon me. So heavily. My will to protect is growling, viciously. ~b"
Posted by blue on "xvi: Hex" by Feral
- "I don’t know why, but this is making me want to call up taoist quotes. Well, I do know why, but that is beside the point. My point is this, lady: this write, your language, this way of expressly constructing ideas (yes, I nabbed it…well sort of) is so uniquely yours… knowing you, it probably has an elemental signature that stands out in the ultra violet spectrum. Stop being so damn clever. “…a resonate form opens” …the last three stanzas really pull this together. Now' fulgurite… that’s curious to be sure; can’t quite figure on what is the key element here, the sand, the lightning or the glass. Curious, very curious. ~b"
Posted by blue on "ix: Albatross " by Feral
- "…well. Where can one ever begin? There is always a sudden severity to your writing, whether toward the darkness or light, it is always there, this… immediate and intentional incisiveness. “…scarlet and viscus, slithering in the sand at my feet”. To command the readers attention so forcefully, so completely… it’s quite brilliant, you rascal. evocation, of course, of course… always love your titles, so clever. Moreover, your writes have an elliptical quality for me, like a slow burning star caught in the orbit of an ultra dense black hole. Orbiting, orbiting. Pondering, pondering. Evocations, indeed. That last stanza and closing line…incomparable. “that place of mythic transition…” you slay me, every time. Much love and respect. ~b"
Posted by blue on "xviii: evocation" by Feral
- "...and the wounds that shadow our flight. Your writing is just so penetrating, like the immediacy of a dire or dangerous situation that amplifies the senses, focused and utterly affecting. As always, miss you. ~b"
Posted by blue on "a private mythology" by Feral
- "...holding said tooth tight tight tight... The lunar tides within call out;
each tiny moon individuated
by a myth, red as self: Slain! Utterly slain. ...just so so you. It makes me smile. Well done, you. Well done. ~b"
Posted by blue on "crowtalk" by Feral
- "Visceral and commanding... this pen of yours, there is an immediate current and undertow that never relents until the crashing calm. So to speak. And, the title... on so many levels. Much respect, as always. ~b"
Posted by blue on "vi: in.violet" by Feral
- "I still can't quite muster a proper response... that second stanza is just so so good... that will have to suffice. For now. ~b"
Posted by blue on "crowtalk" by Feral
- "This is just..... Personally masterful. Truly your creation. I'll have to come back to this, proper. ~b"
Posted by blue on "crowtalk" by Feral
- "...a blood borne elemental. About the closest I can come to describing your poetry. ~b"
Posted by blue on "calico" by Feral
- "I could delve so deeply into this... The strength that this emits is quite something, indeed. ~blue"
Posted by blue on "a private mythology" by Feral
- "oh my! I immediately was stricken with chills.....the trunk appears to be swelling with a person, a soul trying to escape, trapped beneath the gnarled bark.....unsettling to say the least. what a photo!!!! phantastical! ~b "
Posted by blue on "The Mad Tree, Defiant." by Feral
