Comments by Kaiser Black
- "You always have your finger firmly pressed on the pulse of society dan. You take something so visceral, yet explain it so eloquently. Words of wisdom. Well done my friend."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Drums Across Time III" by dwells
- "Great to see you back dan. The time away has sharpened your skills even more so. You weave such amazing lines with ease. Well done."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Disciplinarian" by dwells
- "“On bloody stumps; no weapon now defends†you always weave such clever lines Dan. Every time I read something of yours I immediately re-read it. Just that good. Well done."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Peace by Pieces (villanellish)" by dwells
- "Are we in our death throes? Quite possibly but we can still hope for one last resuscitation. Powerful write dan."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Death Throes" by dwells
- "When you go dark dan, you do it well. You also do it without going overboard, a skill I hope to possess one day. Well done."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Death of Aquarius" by dwells
- "Post-coital youth...that's a new one for me dan. Very creative as usual. Great metaphors."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Snipped" by dwells
- ""Go to sleep now with the lullaby of rat music in the walls" I think I know that song well....but anyway this was intense and I felt like it just kept hammering at me. Well done dan."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "The Caretaker" by dwells
- "you always hit the nail on the head dan. You make your point but never sacrifice the eloquence of your words. This is one of my favorites from you."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Back to the Branches" by dwells
- "Being a completely uneducated poet I have no idea what any of that last note at the bottom meant lol but I do have an idea of what's going on in the write. I especially liked the line "the guillotine of justice". It's always hungry and always eats. "The blade in thirsty silence, impartial as it's fed". Great write as usual dan."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "When Guns Go Silent" by dwells
- "I can always tell when it's your work yet it always seems fresh. That first stanza really sets the tone. "Holding you amongst your pedestals in your pantheon of imposters" more brilliance from you dan. Great stuff."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Iconoclast II" by dwells
- "Again dan you somehow describe the end with beauty. I think at this point we have it coming. "As shooting stars we make a wish and sigh" is an utterly gorgeous line. Well done as usual my friend."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Stardust Memories (villanelle)" by dwells
- "After seeing "howdah" I immediately heard chowder pronounced as "chowdah" the New England way in my head lol. This was such a breezy relaxing type of read. Just another style to to add to your poetry utility belt dan. Well done."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Bwana" by dwells
- "Every one truly does have an axe to grind dan. I think now more than ever. Again you've taken important social commentary added some incredible eloquence and come out with another top notch write. Amazing as always."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Drums Across Time II (villanelle)" by dwells
- "I unfortunately believe that no one is coming to save us dan. On the bright side gives us plenty to write about. A powerful write and an important subject to tackle."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "The House of Man" by dwells
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