Comments by out there
- "Don't have anything insightful to say except I enjoyed this, A LOT.. some gteat metaphors and this is a situation I can def relate to..your writing appears to be getting Sharper, more sophisticated maybe...you might be improving sir and that is something :) "
Posted by out there on ""Today is an abortion."" by Queazenart
- "I think what you're going through -at least in this poem- is very normal and it will pass .. things will look differently soon enough. You know that I'm sure. Best to talk it through with a good friend if you can -don't worry about imposing I'm sure you'd be there for them. With regard to the poem I think you write succinctly but I get the impression you write within yourself by which i mean I think you can write more artistically, even if that might mean bordering on the pretentious- I personally (and it's always a matter of taste) like to see something different in the wording when I read a poem something which really affects.. I think you have more of that in you. Hope that's OK to say, it's with the best intention. I think you're writes are good in conveying your message but I also think there's potentially a lot more to come from you poetically speaking.. And gosh that's a long comment. Write on Queaze."
Posted by out there on "Empty Plate" by Queazenart
