Comments by Queazenart
- "A great poetic middle finger. The subject of the poem sounds like they're secretly jealous or just an up-tight bitch, pardon my language. Great to see something new from you on the site, even if it is a short (yet succulently sweet) rant."
Posted by Queazenart on "she wasn`t a Playboy Bunny" by Devil lyn
- "No need to be forgiven! Life is shitty- Make something out of it! That's what got me writing in the first place. Anyways, great piece. It made me chuckle a little, it made me think a bit, it has balls enough to not beat around the bush on a really, REALLY serious subject. It's very negative in theme, but it's good to air out all the bad shit sometimes. Also, stanza 4 felt real and bitter. Good stuff. Hope you have a better day today!"
Posted by Queazenart on "Suicide" by LunaFlower
- "What a powerful piece. Your images of nature colliding with anatomy is striking. The bitter sadness and the reveal in the fourth cluster of lines (I hesitate to call it a stanza) are painful- but not in the sappy sort of way. It's like a visceral, literal pain. Brilliant piece. Congrats of PotD."
Posted by Queazenart on ".Bleach.Seasons." by K_Love
- "The "I am... And..." section I guess represents a self-perpetuating cycle - An Ourobouros sort of thing. The title grabbed me and the last line is so negative and blunt that I just had to smile. The images and word choice in stanza two were a bit bland, but nice poem overall."
Posted by Queazenart on "Purposelessness" by Purposelessness
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