Comments by Queazenart
- "A great poetic middle finger. The subject of the poem sounds like they're secretly jealous or just an up-tight bitch, pardon my language. Great to see something new from you on the site, even if it is a short (yet succulently sweet) rant."
Posted by Queazenart on "she wasn`t a Playboy Bunny" by Devil lyn
- "This is an immensely thick and dense piece. It feels like the tone, or maybe just the scenery, shifts a few times in the poem, but the imagery is so- dare I say- esoteric that it's hard to really tell. It really takes some effort to fully grasp. The reward is significant, though. After a few reads I must admit I really like this piece. Well done once again. "
Posted by Queazenart on "macabre en concerto" by Devil lyn
- "A good, dizzying cluster-fuck of on-the-spot thoughts- Stream of consciousness, I think that's called. I saw you comment on a Jack_White poem earlier and, tbh, your work reminds me a lot of her stuff. Also, bonus points for Henry Rollins :D"
Posted by Queazenart on "it's like quoting Henry Rollins" by Devil lyn
- "It's nice to read something with a personal touch from you. It feels more composed than usual, which is cool, and it also bears some great weight. I am especially enamored with the car-crash metaphor which, though not new, you do great justice. This might be my favorite of yours thus far."
Posted by Queazenart on "when roaches stop visiting " by Devil lyn
- "Is this a big homage to metal music, or did you just happen to use a bunch of Slayer song titles? lol Cool concept. You spun something interesting here."
Posted by Queazenart on "influenza wings" by Devil lyn
