Comments by Noel Haiasi

"I really liked this write. I really did. It was philosophical, it was interesting, and over all well written. The only problem for me is that you rhymed within with within. Rhyming a word with the same word is kind of my pet peeve, but still I don't think that can detract from my enjoyment of this write. "
Posted by Noel Haiasi on "The Man Whom God Forgot" by shadowsinthelight

"I like some of the points you have made, a lot of which I agree with. I also like the angry nature of some of the lines. The only thing I could say negatively about it was maybe some differences in opinion."
Posted by Noel Haiasi on "Sermon (a rhyming rant at Catholics and Christians)" by shadowsinthelight