Comments by Lotophagi

  • "I think this has to be my favourite piece of yours.... it's incredible, stunning write, a knock to the jaw and an eye-opener to life and living, being human, emotional torment and turmoil and acceptance of such. brilliant write. Thank you."
    Posted by Lotophagi on "blink-breathe-repeat" by Six-Out
  • "when I saw the title I thought this had to be you.... this is beautiful, liquid, full of desire and intense lyrical imagery. sublime write in the very essence of sublimity. Thank you."
    Posted by Lotophagi on "bang [you're dead]" by Six-Out
  • ""and I wouldn't have it any other way. unless I had a choice. I'd erase it all." unreal, that cuts to the core of reality in a way that I've never thought of - contradictory but perfect. amazing write - you always create emotion. Thank you."
    Posted by Lotophagi on "verse two. [wordless]" by Six-Out
  • "ah, these words have a lulling effect.... just drifting in sweet melancholy and then suddenly that last line. just bam - paradoxically it forced the air from my lungs leaving me winded. thank you."
    Posted by Lotophagi on "real men admit to their tears." by Six-Out
  • "you play my heart like a master, this is haunting, images flitting past like a feature flick, brilliant. Thank you."
    Posted by Lotophagi on "[starlight.sonnet]" by Six-Out
  • "brilliance.... I love the grunge, I love the regret, I love the cynacism and anger, and resignation..... the simile - just perfect. You rock. Thank you."
    Posted by Lotophagi on "[mixed.drink] melodies" by Six-Out
  • "*sighs* this piece just blows my mind every time I read it..... and that last line just punches my lungs and sucks the air out of me... damned brilliant. god you're good."
    Posted by Lotophagi on "[living is cliche]" by Six-Out
  • "Jon, dammit, my chest is hurting from this...... beautiful piece, and I love the last line, yes, I know.... that's all."
    Posted by Lotophagi on "I am your dreams:" by Six-Out
  • "ahhh, Jon, this is so real and haunting.... the melancholy yearning is tangible, it makes reality hit with all of its lonely force. Beautifully written. Thank you."
    Posted by Lotophagi on "rain- [a painted cascade]" by Six-Out
  • ""on our backs- plucking stars from the sky with a broken bottle between us. we talked about what was" reflective, introspective and yearning.... excellent write Jon. Thank you."
    Posted by Lotophagi on "fourty-two ashes" by Six-Out
  • "You always manage to create stunning imagery, awesome concepts, and the brutal reality of humanity.... the melancholia is tangible, threatening, and lovely. Thank you."
    Posted by Lotophagi on "[living is cliche]" by Six-Out
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