Comments by sIo
- "Further on I’ll have to reread this. I see where you’re going and I just lost your direction towards the end. Stimulating for sure. "
Posted by sIo on "There is a way" by midnights voice
- " This is almost perfect I was sucked in the first two stanzas and quite impressed however a bit farther down your fluidity threw me off but then the last stanza was perfect . Much better however thanI think I myself could do. "
Posted by sIo on "Bitters" by midnights voice