Comments by BeautifulCalamity
- "I really loved how you opened this, such a beautiful piece. perfect in everyway possible. ."and those late nights- midnight dances with an old notebook".. you , damn. . you're such an amazing writer. "
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "-sympathetic" by Six-Out
- "applies here, for you. If only he could know you. . maybe then he'd see. this is a powerful.amazing piece, but really-so much more."
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "Worth" by Six-Out
- "+ to think that I had it bad .. this is utterly heartbreaking, really. . it didnt make me cry-rather, it made me feel. made me look at myself and my situation. sometimes people don't always see what they have, regardless of it's brilliance. I think that a"
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "Worth" by Six-Out
- ""and your hands dance an outdated symphony.
orchestrated chaos, as your lips kiss a paper sky-". . You always leave me fucking amazed with your words, you're damn great . . you're the talent that I wish I could come close to.. "
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "ten thousand miles from home" by Six-Out
- "--so many lines that just fit. perfectly arranged and written. "your arms and my neck. a perfect set- it would seem
as we slept under a star-crossed tomorrow
and begged the sun. not to rise". . . *bows*, amazing
"
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "fourty-two ashes" by Six-Out
- "once again, you are on my faves list. wow. . .this was absolutely beautiful. damn, you've really made me fall in love with your words with this one. it's so perfect. . so right. I dunno, it all just kinda clicked for me in my head if that makes sense. so"
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "fourty-two ashes" by Six-Out
- ""a bartender serving lonely martinis and heart-splitting shots of Never Clear.". . whoa, beautiful piece. written by two magnificent writers, perfectly mixes the great talent of both of you in an odyssey. . pain filled, just an amazing work ;)
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Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "Circle Yes or No" by Six-Out
- "damn, I left a really good comment but the page decided not to respond :|, this is another awesome write six boy, I'll take fragments of this with me. . . your words, are drenched with beauty. wonderful :)"
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "poetry." by Six-Out
- ""but it seems/ I've walked into this battle [unprepared]
with only my words-"..ehh, I quote too much..there's a lot I liked about this. it's a very strong piece, covered in sadness and bleeding wishful wanting. you're a lovely writer, and this was anoth"
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "David & Goliath" by Six-Out
- "I am stunned completely breathless.. this piece left me gripping for something that is there in my mind, that I want.. but I cant have. in all I've read of you, you have never failed to amaze me.. you are truly talented jon.. great work.."
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "[life] as.art" by Six-Out
- ""while your shadows cast glances towards the sky
and we all believe we can fly::".. damn, you completely amazed me with some of your lines.. i liked the title as well, this is an absolutely wonderful piece. full of pain, and never-ending intensity...wel"
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "god's kiss/ a passion of the past" by Six-Out
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