Comments by Shikiryu
- "The stops and starts I got from listening to one of the Interstellar soundtracks that has a clock ticking in the background of the whole song. Essentially was experimenting to get the same result without overtly rhyming the poem or using standard syllable structures. Glad the effect was realized. Thank you Nat"
Posted by Shikiryu on "Entropy" by Shikiryu
- "My previous reply was kind of callaous. What I mean is that I'm kinda alone in this world. Sure people might like me and stuff but I bear all my hardships and pain by myself. If I decide the burden is too much one day, I don't think there's anyone alive who has the right to tell me not to end it or not. Not saying I'm gonna off myself but if i make that choice, it's mine"
Posted by Shikiryu on ""Death might not be so bad"" by Shikiryu
- "Reading the KJV bible as a kid paid off ha, thanks for the kind words."
Posted by Shikiryu on "Entropy" by Shikiryu
- "Glad you enjoyed it. What do you think about the flow if you dont mind me asking. I normally use full sentences but i decided to see how this would turn out if it was read with the single line pauses for emphasis
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Posted by Shikiryu on "Entropy" by Shikiryu
- "Thank you, I think duality is something that metre and rhyme is basically built to express. Like the sun and moon, moon and stars duality is all around. Do you have anything written with the moon as focus? I'd def give it a read"
Posted by Shikiryu on "D5// Magic I See" by Shikiryu
- "I've noticed my poems tend to ramble so I've started experimenting with a less is more concept. You wouldn't believe how long this was at first, 3 pages ha. Thanks for the kind feedback"
Posted by Shikiryu on "D5// Magic I See" by Shikiryu
