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  • "I love this poem! The narrator isn't very optimistic, yet they dismissed what was troubling them, but only until their thoughts were proven to be true. Nice poem!"
    Posted by Pride Ed on "Death of the Dirge" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
  • "This piece delivers a nice contrast, bleak, but the shortness of the lines ensures a quick pace, letting each line hit all the harder before leaving me pleasantly empty at the end, good work :)"
    Posted by HeadpatSlut on "Death of the Dirge" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
  • "i love the subtle rhythm to this. It is eloquent though fatigued. weary... conceding because it all seems moot and pointless. it's so wonderful to see you posting again. i was thinking about you just the other day."
    Posted by Unknown on "Death of the Dirge" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
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