Comments by Natternes
- "Yep...regretful one night stands. They are a bitch from both sides. Eloquent description. You put across the strange passion and pre-regret already lingering. Well done!"
Posted by Natternes on "Sleeping with the Enemy" by Bound_In_Chains
- "Sounds like dissacoiative personality disorder or even multiple personality disorder! Very metaphorical account of the hidden parts inside us all. Good work!"
Posted by Natternes on "Sickened Mind" by WinglessFaith
- "You can definitely tell that you are an artist =) great descriptive piece! You know how to use words to create a picture well!"
Posted by Natternes on "calico" by Feral
- "I very much envy your ability to paint such a vivid picture using so few words. A very big well done!"
Posted by Natternes on "three lines" by Bashost
- "I like how making the readers eyes flit back and forth adds to the panicky undertones. Also the frenzy. ery much the frenzy. Good work!"
Posted by Natternes on "Night of Horror " by gearhead
- "I very much like the isolated misanthropic anger that comes across in this piece. The only line I have shall quarrell with is "with life and it's games..." to me it smells of a) a filler line and b) a line aimed to please the masses, which to me is not what poetry should be about. It should be a completely personal thing which others may or may not relate too. Just my opinion.
Besides that, quality work!"
Posted by Natternes on "Prodigal Son" by mikeygreenleaf
