Comments by malevolencefixation
- "In response to this part of your commentary, I wasn't writing it from a personal view. The metaphor that is carried obviously through the poem is trees. It was not a singular tree, therefore I did not want it to be about a singular person. I feel that society as a whole right now is on a fast track to having absolutely no morals. I tried to demonstrate that, and I'm sorry you weren't able to get that out of the poem. The concept of the poem as a whole was repetition... It's about seasons, which are on a constant cycle of repetition. I like the first three lines, because although redundant, they make me feel a certain kind of suspense. The entire thing was supposed to be read at an urgent, fast pace. I'm also not sure to what you are referring about grammar mistakes? I was always under the impression that a poetic license allows me to bend the rules of grammar a tad, if you will. I'm sorry you weren't a fan. Cheers to you too! "
Posted by malevolencefixation on "Skeletons" by malevolencefixation
- "I think we may simply have different styles. I enjoy repetition. It hooks me to have some repition due to the lack if rhyme in the poem. I appreciate the comment though. Poetry is just such a diverse thing. We can't all like everything I suppose"
Posted by malevolencefixation on "Skeletons" by malevolencefixation
