Comments by All Members
- "Yes Todd is right. This one's all about the imagery. What a strong and vivid impression you imprint. It takes a long time to fade for its haunting, eerie cruelty. "
Posted by Cantara on "Swaying" by Bashost
- "Oh my god I love this! It's brilliant! I have no words to do it any justice. It just speaks for itself. Brilliant idea."
Posted by Cantara on "My First Pet" by Bashost
- "I very much envy your ability to paint such a vivid picture using so few words. A very big well done!"
Posted by Natternes on "three lines" by Bashost
- "man bashost, I got the most awesome image in my head on this. you painted a very dark image of all things cool. I should write something inspired by the picture I have in the dark mind you coated in grey and morbid. haha loved this!"
Posted by haunted on "Swaying" by Bashost
- "Great imagery and tantalizing perspective of a sacred dark ritual at midnight.. Thank you for sharing :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Swaying" by Bashost
- "This is so sad and touching. Remembering people as they looked at their funerals is depressing. I guess it just further points out how separate our minds and bodies are. So separate, that even our appearance changes when the presence of our minds are gone. Great poem"
Posted by malevolencefixation on "The First Time I Saw You in a Dress" by Bashost
- "i love works that make you think outside the box... rich in imagery, my imagination soars.. there are quite a few possibilities. an abandoned doll's house gathering dust(the obvious one), flowers in the attic came to mind as well...being imprisoned in an attic and only connection to the outside world is a solitary window... or a recluse..deliberately shutting themselves away and peeping as days pass by. wonderful piece of writing! cudos!"
Posted by natalie on "three lines" by Bashost
- "You have painted a vivid and colourful image in my mind. Each word, a brush stroke. "
Posted by Cantara on "three lines" by Bashost
- "Sometimes the greatest loneliness can be self imposed. Sometimes we are not so much abandoned as we are staying separate. It rarely feels that way though. Nice write!"
Posted by Miztaken4beauty on "three lines" by Bashost
- "Sinister and very poetic piece! I would like to see my soul someday.. Very well penned! :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Prize" by Bashost
- "Beatiful somber imagery.. Beauty can be found everywhere.. Even in a cherred forest or a dry desert.. The last 4 lines are a perfect happy end.. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "my field of wildflowers " by Bashost
- "What grotesque and morbid imagery. Very sinister words and message mr. Excellent. "
Posted by Cantara on "Prize" by Bashost
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