Comments by NikesRain
- "It's like fingers, drumming on soft , dark wood.... just enough weight to draw notice, just enough depth to keep straining for more.... shadow and light, the perfect waltzing companions"
Posted by NikesRain on "Shadow Whispering" by Lab Rat
- "The King's madness... not so mad, upheaval, a hurricane of less than lightly done moments, times. He is stubborn, but he always let his voice be heard. I'd still be a smartass to him anyway....
fyi the tower in the tarot means upheaval and change, a wake up call that change is coming, ready or not.....NOT destruction"
Posted by NikesRain on "The Mad King's Tower" by Lab Rat
- "I love the voice of this. An awakening and bold resolve laced with ... something more than just sadness or loss, something deeper, more inflicting. The opening is strong and no nonsense, moving smoothly though and finishing with a resigned doneness."
Posted by NikesRain on "Broken Thoughts Inside A Sober Mind" by soul_versing
- "There is a distinct boldness and clarity in this. An inner, 'sane' monologue that defies the expressed outward condition. The flow and language done beautifully, enticing the reader further, feel deeper. It conjures both awakening and sadness in its reading. Well done piece indeed."
Posted by NikesRain on "The Silent Killer" by Anarchist
- "Heav, tangible emotion throughout expressed well and without losing weight. A hard felt loss conveyed in the color of its weight. Well done"
Posted by NikesRain on "its finally over " by Glass eyes
- "Softly felt, for me anyway. Smooth and flowing with just the right tempo. For the cacophony of sound they can rise to, this was more lyric, more dreamy. Lovely"
Posted by NikesRain on "Arid Speech" by lupus tenebrae
- "this is lovely and painful and inspiring and aching all at the same time... it keeps a delicate balance between tears and smiles... it touches deep with familiar fingers"
Posted by NikesRain on "My Villain, My Savior. My Heart" by Lab Rat
- "As like Drea... I come back to this (as you took away the 'doves') and reflect often, missing your work and words and overall the person behind them."
Posted by NikesRain on "Capsized SouL" by OLd SouL
- "A though provoking work. Not something to skim lightly over and feel with token fingers... although not severe, the frustration in this is quite evident....nicely done"
Posted by NikesRain on "Cumulonimbus" by Phalanx
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