Comments by Damon Tarloth
- "I did see a slight grammatical error that was overlooked. Not being picky, just pointing it out so you know. Line 2: "weather they be playing cards." (Whether) . . . . . .
I would want to know if I overlooked something, so I could correct it. :) .......
Interesting story! Well Done!
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Posted by Damon Tarloth on "Laying out the cards" by terris crimson
