Comments by All Members

"This was freaking awesome! I loved the hidden / not so hidden message Within the other message in its entirety! Freaking brilliant!"
Posted by natalie on "Wandering." by Dreamless

"This is beautiful and sad! There are so many truths here for me...thanks!"
Posted by natalie on "Dust." by Dreamless

"Aren't we always drawn to what's not good for us? Well done! Loved the snippets of alliteration and your use of metaphors!"
Posted by natalie on "Blossoms and lust." by Dreamless

"lovely piece! I really enjoy reading it, nice work"
Posted by Billy Waise on "Monochrome." by Dreamless

"This has a hoplessness to it that rips your heart out. You portray it very well with your words. Nicely done I enjoyed reading"
Posted by LOKI on "I won't hold my breath." by Dreamless

"This one opens wounds in the very core of my existence, unfortunately. But it's always better to reminisce in a poetic frame of mind. "
Posted by Purposelessness on "Wandering." by Dreamless

"I hear faint whispers of loathing towards the monotonousness relationship an individual's mind can sometimes have with the uncaring and cruel progression of time. A timeless and impactful piece for sure. Well met, poet. Thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "Monochrome." by Dreamless

"A touch of reminder of something that once was. Thank you for the read. "
Posted by RoseTheBrokenHearted on "Wandering." by Dreamless

"Good flow and pacing, "until the last of my sanity dripped onto your delusive tongue". Excellent read. "
Posted by Adagios on "Wandering." by Dreamless

" This is by far ``Stupid Shit`` ... but I do wonder about that kiss - clever wording as it sets the pace for what is to come ... Devlin. "
Posted by Devil-lyn on "Wandering." by Dreamless

"I really like this piece, reminding me that I am insignificant and you are my divinity...Xie Xie -hm"
Posted by Unknown on "Wandering." by Dreamless

"I am touched by this work, in more ways than I had imagined I would be. From the first word, to the very last, I am in love. Thank you for the read! "
Posted by RoseTheBrokenHearted on "Dust." by Dreamless

"I'm still lingering on the concept of the void in time. I fucking love pretty bullshitðŸ’‹ .like Oreos, shoves this piece into back pocket. cðŸªðŸªkies and ðŸŒˆ rainbows... Shh and just go with it. ~blah.com~"
Posted by soul_versing on "Dust." by Dreamless

"wow, I was brought into this poem by the last stanza, really like the wilting and crumbling and clawing at the walls in our minds...that hits me on so many levels...Xie Xie!"
Posted by Unknown on "Dust." by Dreamless

"https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HcVv9R1ZR84 this piece reminds me of this song SO much. and i have to say that i agree with nett. this is beyond well put. and your writing is absolutely amazing. well done! "
Posted by Star on "Dollhouse." by Dreamless

"Read this three times to really soak in the feel put into your poem, i really feel the shades of gray as time fades nicely written-Mrk"
Posted by Unknown on "Monochrome." by Dreamless

""somewhere between lifeless and life support" that's where you really got me, well done. "
Posted by hazydaisy on "Monochrome." by Dreamless

"The sense of the timelessness that exists within routines and demands finds a home in this work. Expertly expressed and worth a second read -- which it got from me. Very, very well done."
Posted by Unknown on "Monochrome." by Dreamless

"I know what you mean. Some hours are actually two hours, even though only one hour has passed. I like your expression of time...so slow, so fast. It'll probably get worse before it gets better but it will get better. Then shitty again, then get better from that. All we can hope is that the betters outnumber the worses in the end, or that we at least end our time during a better. Or perhaps it would be better to end our time because things are worse? Stop confusin' me, man! See what you did? Solid piece. Cheers."
Posted by Unknown on "Monochrome." by Dreamless

"I think therefore I am. I fade to black because my mind has blurred the lines of innocense and lies."
Posted by Unknown on "Monochrome." by Dreamless

""As the minutes melt to hours And the clock crumbles away" beautiful words but not just these the poem has a whole..Hits home like a familiar songs..sad and welcoming "
Posted by River Lily on "Monochrome." by Dreamless

"What to say... Hm. Life doesn't suck just the persons in it. And where the hell is my shot? ...not that I'd drink it, but that's besides the point. You have an knack for recreating your raw emotion back into your pieces. When I read this, I felt like it was me who was spewing these words. - Applauds"
Posted by soul_versing on "Monochrome." by Dreamless

"*downs a shot* great imagery and i loved the flow of this piece. cheers to you! "
Posted by Star on "Monochrome." by Dreamless

"I agree with two of the comments. the last stanza is beyond great. i loved this piece. "
Posted by Star on "Inferno." by Dreamless

"Lovely silken piece Dreamless! Love saturates every line. The emotion expressed was originally conveyed. Much enjoyed :) "
Posted by Void Vortex on "Inferno." by Dreamless

"Well then... I guess we can thank the gods for hard liquor :) Thanx for sharing. A well flowed and encapturing piece!"
Posted by Void Vortex on "Monochrome." by Dreamless

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