Comments by Railway_Butterfly

  • "and was to be considered in this way.. and I particularly enjoyed the opening verse. 'I'm lackluster in eloquence' it's almost like you're being ironic.. the words, to say, or read or hear sound wonderful.. then you consider what they mean.."
    Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "lost in lucidity -" by Six-Out
  • "for some reason.. the full stops in this really stood out. I tend to over use commas, maybe that's why.. but it was really effective. Like every bit of what you said was a statment in it's own right.."
    Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "lost in lucidity -" by Six-Out
  • "'and these words are nothing but me. and I don't exist.' I feel this.. quietly. I think I must applaud your honesty here.. I'm never able to be so all out open in my poetry, so real. I don't think I ever will be. This is excellent -"
    Posted by Railway_Butterfly on ".silk.bullets. [rip me gently]" by Six-Out
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