Comments by Railway_Butterfly
- "ah, this is excellent.. read like a dream, I could feel the bitter curve of my lips deepening with every line. You may not understand why people like this so much, but I feel that I do.. it's just so relatable. How many of us have been there, having this conversation and feel that angry burn on our fingers ? There was a line in this.. 'my hands moves then..' and I thought, I *hoped* for a second, that it was moving to punch him in the face. Perhaps this piece did that enough without you needing to.. "
Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "Cigarette" by Carmina Gitana