Comments by All Members
- "I would like to say that to my dad too. I enjoyed this because it was an elaborate conveyance of the ironies of relationships with disfunction. Thank you for sharing and congrats on poem of the day. :)"
Posted by Jonas Robinson on "every line [goodbye&goodnight]" by Six-Out
- "The challenge of life, is to rise. Those who attempt to talk you out of such are either mad or trying to tear it all apart. We do need stars that shine. Those that truly, shine do it their own way."
Posted by Phalanx on "wake up, dreamer." by Six-Out
- "Miss you and your pen man. Loved the conflicting concepts in here. When the world is a bitter place we find our escape, create a better reality. It doesn't make the world change, but maybe it shifts our perspective just enough to put up with it for a while. Come back and write sometime."
Posted by Dilated View on "lost in lucidity -" by Six-Out
- "My chest feels like I have the beat of a tapping foot. You’re transforming in front of a crowd. "
Posted by sIo on "battle scars." by Six-Out
- "I need this to be what you used to write and I need that once in a lifetime family back. You were the beginning. "
Posted by sIo on "Coal Walker." by Six-Out
- ".....I seriously want to say how this makes me feel but I can’t find the words. Like an old dog coming out of the rain and just finding now solace in the comfort of shelter. "
Posted by sIo on "waves." by Six-Out
- "Stripping the fibers of my heart away and I need them to be ash. "
Posted by sIo on "waking." by Six-Out
- "Again, did I just stop loving your work? Because I don’t think it matters how you feel about a person you will never stop loving their work if you are a true poet. I can’t explain how close this hits me. "
Posted by sIo on "feeling." by Six-Out
- "I don’t know how I’ve never read this. It’s so powerful it made me feel hot. "
Posted by sIo on "conflicted." by Six-Out
- "Things are better and I too allowed so much to make me who I was and that person was just unable to cope with life and my family turned their backs on me. My mother just left her husband who hit my younger brother etc. she realized how bad he was. He blew 10k on an game of war.... so we are all crawling out of holes but the light hasn’t gone. Thank you for the reply it means more than you know. "
Posted by sIo on "until you can't anymore." by Six-Out
- "Becoming someone different is ok sometimes.
It took me a long time to work on fixing myself, even after realizing who I became. A mix of drugs, alcohol, and being unable to accept that I let myself be a shitty person really messed me up.
I hope things are better for you now."
Posted by Six-Out on "until you can't anymore." by Six-Out
- "I just stopped writing because I became someone different, I stopped running away and I started making different choices m, and then I was hurt so much worse. So deeply I felt it in my bones despite my clinched teeth and sorry eyes. I felt I deserved it for the longest time. I hurt so many people because I couldn’t comprehend love in its most basic form. Awareness and consideration, that every action you make may not o let be affecting you. Jesus, I think back and all I remember is how cruel I was to those who were so kind to me and I was not aware, because all I knew was pain and all I was told was everything I did was wrong. I deeply regret the way I ever treated anyone who opened not only their arms but their home to me. I was no ones responsibility but my own and I had no control over even that unless I was out of reach of smothering hands. I will never read this the same ever again in my life because I now know what it feels like when someone just stops caring let alone loving you and it’s like the earth shattering beneath you with not a crash or a cut just the simple knowledge that you, and only you, were just that easy to stop loving. "
Posted by sIo on "until you can't anymore." by Six-Out
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