Comments by paradoxist

  • "A few of the end line rhymes were a bit forced. Other than that, the poem expresses the thoughts that fall through mind well, nicely done. ~Forever taint the ink"
    Posted by paradoxist on "...dying" by dropdeadgirl25
  • "The longing emotion and lost memory intertwine together very nicely. The poem described very well of the reaction to a heartbreak, very nice. ~Forever taint the ink"
    Posted by paradoxist on "changed." by Star
  • "Ah the heart, it is a wonderful thing isn't it? :) The poem was written well, the passion is very strong, nicely done. ~Forever taint the ink"
    Posted by paradoxist on "Sweetest." by CoffeeBreak
  • "This poem is good, the concept of fading away was described brilliantly. I do believe there should be a comma in the third line right after ocean. Well done :) ~Forever taint the ink"
    Posted by paradoxist on "Fading eyes of dying hearts" by ForceFedDeath
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