Comments by Jonas
- "a random poetry find.
you're an asshole, sir. here i am having this decent day and i come across this poem. it is incredibly well written and expressive, so i wanted to read it (and did). but holy shit if i'm not just a tad more depressed now than i was. this was written a long time ago, so i'm sure the wounds are healed, however you've done a wonderful job of creating an image of the wounded"
Posted by Jonas on "empty ships. [lost hope in a halo]" by Six-Out
- "first: it is a wonderful picture on your home page.
second: this poem is wound tight with not a word wasted the tension jumping off the tongue."
Posted by Jonas on "wishful drinking." by Six-Out
- "the lines that brought together sleepless nights and days wasted hit home rather poignantly... your writing just gets better and better fellow wordsmith."
Posted by Jonas on "old oceans" by Six-Out
- "you've improved quite dramatically since i started reading you. you are still a fag, but that's ok, cause you write very well. the glass house/stone breath line was stunningly beautirific."
Posted by Jonas on "I am the [myth]" by Six-Out
