Comments by Jonas

  • "are you around anymore. i have the odd feeling of palpably missing someone i never met. shucks life is weird. i hope you are well and someday read this. i further hope that it strikes you as wonderful that another person somewhere somehow thinks good things about you from time to time."
    Posted by Jonas on "she dreams" by cre
  • "visions of our dreams moving past us, grinding in the mill of time until we have a fine dust of regret that blows away on a crisp wind from the sea... screaming, this is our spilt milk. beautiful, your flair for the melancholy is unmatched"
    Posted by Jonas on "she dreams" by cre
  • "the gray lines are definitely worth noting... beautifully ugly and haunting. hi, janie-pie, by the by."
    Posted by Jonas on "Until We Meet Again" by cre
  • "i felt like a piece of silk floating on the breeze, y'know how sometimes something gets trapped in a little playful breeze and just flies around? then at the last as always happens i crash into a puddle of mud and think about my flying days..."
    Posted by Jonas on "Not Even In My Dreams" by cre
  • "the world, comotion, adulation, frustration, i turn my head i walk away, but find i cannot stay tuned out totally as some beautiful meaning will sometime drift by. beautiful piece, if sombre."
    Posted by Jonas on "Lethe" by cre
  • "how very very very sweet *sigh* the sentiment and expression of it, i found quite lovely, honest, i can almost see the blush of white skin."
    Posted by Jonas on "Crush" by cre
  • "always crushing in a beautifully blue sort of way... i don't know i think your poetry is a suicidal snowflake."
    Posted by Jonas on "Nothing Left" by cre
  • "how can such sadness be contained within you!? it's a rhetorical question as most members of 'dark poetry' are not 'happy' people... but i kinda like you and would rather you not dwell in the pit of depression. much love."
    Posted by Jonas on "There Is (No Meaning)" by cre
  • "but then most people would not be alive after an event cataclysmic enough to produce an environment w/o effective gov't... so... yup..."
    Posted by Jonas on "anarchy?" by cre
  • "oh wow... hmmmm... i utterly disagree with this notion. i to the time when this system crumbles and pure unadultrated anarchy rules... i dunno... most people would probably not agree with me..."
    Posted by Jonas on "anarchy?" by cre
  • "a song spun of silver thread... cordite the smell of a shotgun shower of emotion and the lack of love and devotion when you feel you're filed under 'some time'"
    Posted by Jonas on "convenient" by cre
  • "hope and i often do battle... lost and forlorne why is it comforting to think and know that this will never ever end? i can't figure it out... perhaps it's just some solidarity"
    Posted by Jonas on "When I Lost" by cre
  • "this is gorgeous! breeze of realism we dance in it skirts and hair flowing some kind of small infinity before the spin of the earth has its way and we walk sadly and slowly away away away..."
    Posted by Jonas on "Things Change" by cre
  • "so sad, always so sad. ...hope is like nostalgia, nostalgia while bitter-sweet beautiful; useless... windswept and cold you left me"
    Posted by Jonas on "On the Tips Of a Driven Wind" by cre
  • "like a river of sadness, true in it's indigo hue, but also in the way the sun seems to sparkle on the ripples that come from somewhere below the surface... bittersweet, always."
    Posted by Jonas on "These the Lonely Times" by cre
  • "always piercing, like a sliver of light through perfect dark, white and radiant, but not quite enough to stifle the lack of light permeating this space... you own the spark, the flash of light contained but never owning the night"
    Posted by Jonas on "The Shadow Of His Ruin" by cre
  • "the wind howls through my ears and i swear there are voices there singing songs of dread in the scales of the dead she pulls me down into her grave i am buried there buried with her... beautiful work"
    Posted by Jonas on "A Sad and Dying Sea" by cre
  • "nepenthe i scream for satiation! you are achingly beautiful on your writing... i want to escape but can't turn away... beauty, this piece, siren's song she calls from the depths, and i descend"
    Posted by Jonas on "Breathe Me Whole" by cre
  • "wrapped like a blanket, a song of silence a word of pennance the stroke of a caligraphic pen on stone, on sky, on unmarked grave, girl you made me cry... girl just remember it's only once a girl will fly"
    Posted by Jonas on "This Cliff (or final days)" by cre
  • "it doesn't so much sound like it, but that is utterly complimentary, if your work is sad, it is perfectly sad, a sadness that pierces and penetrates to the very core of a sensitive young man... you show me blue hued beauty"
    Posted by Jonas on "It Should Have Been Better" by cre
  • "with each piece i read you break my heart... you may have noticed i don't frequent your site so much as i did... because, i swear you touch so deeply and chip away pieces of my heart... and i'm afraid that i will have none left at the end of my reading"
    Posted by Jonas on "It Should Have Been Better" by cre
  • "pain, not so ephemeral not so beautiful as the romantic would have it seem... seeming... dreaming... lost and dying..."
    Posted by Jonas on "another little girl" by cre
  • "i've found it harder and harder to read your works... i find shades of life and little scraps of things buried, not ready to surface in my head that are burned into reality by your words... "
    Posted by Jonas on "another little girl" by cre
  • "you swung from one tone in the first stanza to the next with such violent force that my head is still spinning. i hate the black men, smiling, beguiling and ruining the innocence and creating the weary jaded"
    Posted by Jonas on "I May Never Forget" by cre
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