Comments by Jonas
- "ah, i'd almost forgotten about the beautiful simplicity that is to be found in your words... refreshing, this piece was with a little twist of downplayed passion"
Posted by Jonas on "By The By" by liquid_emotion
- "music, calls to the air a taste of hourglass sand years... sometimes unlocks a part of your soul."
Posted by Jonas on "Papas Song" by liquid_emotion
- "intense, like boiling black oil seeping from you duodendum into your stomach, burning, aching, death sounds like a holiday."
Posted by Jonas on "OUT" by liquid_emotion
- "such eccsatic fear... a bleeding heart doesn't know whether to run to or from love... wonderful write."
Posted by Jonas on "4/10" by liquid_emotion
- "when you're on the border of peace and yearning... on the yearning side, waiting, but still steadily breathing, anticipating your chance to relocate. as long as your papers check out..."
Posted by Jonas on "Hark, I Hear A Thought" by liquid_emotion
- "always, the adjective i want is taken. so i'll steal it back. inspired. this poem makes me want to get up and dance just because this, this is LIFE it only happens once... DO SOMETHING! well written dearie, i can see why you're proud"
Posted by Jonas on "I Don't Buy Into Generic" by liquid_emotion
- "sneaky and kinda cubist... in the mind... i dunno, sometimes it's hard to describe what words do to me... these are lukewarm words, and they feel like they should be."
Posted by Jonas on "A Monet Sky" by liquid_emotion
- "smoke, invisible but ever so palpable hovers above my head, swirling with all the thoughts and forgotten memories a child of twenty should or shouldn't have... stoned with the lights out."
Posted by Jonas on "Through The Obvious" by liquid_emotion
- "shit... the vortex... vertigo... looking down and there is no safety net and all that stands between you and certain demise is a will that is too close to shattered to speak of... you're in my thoughts."
Posted by Jonas on "cocaine" by liquid_emotion
- "beautiful... sad... hopeless... i feel these words, and i find it funny how you seem to be able to capture them in the same form they are in my mind... strange..."
Posted by Jonas on "The Edge" by liquid_emotion
- "i feel this right now... i'm on the edge of my own precipice... waiting for the right time to jump... wheeee!"
Posted by Jonas on "Tomorrow Again" by liquid_emotion
- "there was a guitar picking out a funky arpeggio while i was reading this... turns out it was the white stripes... but it all fits. pounding, breaking, arcane insane... how do we do it?"
Posted by Jonas on "falling" by liquid_emotion
- "the line jane singled out is by far my favourite in this perfect piece. so weary, so tired... and it's so painfully easy... hmmm..."
Posted by Jonas on "Siamese twins" by liquid_emotion
- "how absolutely adept! i agree completely... there is a world out there that is rich and flowing with less than simple pleasures... some people (like you and i) just like the sweeter things... excellent"
Posted by Jonas on "Where The heart Is" by liquid_emotion
- "desire plays a wicked game in sunshine, tropics days. a little slice of winter time, coy, calculated, but still at the whim of the wind. you have captured the push pull of real desire."
Posted by Jonas on "Forever Reborn" by liquid_emotion
- "i read it again... in the privacy of my own office... i've got tears in my eyes... and though i remember a weight that will never leave my heart it is somehow lighter for being shared..."
Posted by Jonas on "A Mourning Past" by liquid_emotion
- "i can't even describe to you how much these words mean to me... i alsmost cried, would've let myself if i wasn't at a reception desk. god, i want to find words to express how much this poem means to me, but i can't..."
Posted by Jonas on "A Mourning Past" by liquid_emotion
- "what an excellent last line... just kinda an 'in passing' feeling that comes off oh so poetic and romantic."
Posted by Jonas on "By The By" by liquid_emotion
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