Comments by Jonas

  • "Common moments their homeliness beautifully underscoring the impermanence of freaking everything."
    Posted by Jonas on "Topkapi" by TropicalSnowstorm
  • "i want to do something profane with this, like put it on a t-shirt and wear it for days on end without washing it, constantly bringing it up in conversation and encouraging people to read it. ...this is one of the best bits of writing i've had the pleasure of reading in a long time. ...i may actually do the above."
    Posted by Jonas on "Omne ignotum pro magnifico " by TropicalSnowstorm
  • "you amaze me with your ability to construct honest words that jump off of the page with sincerity that is hard to find anywhere ever. originality does not exist but when i read you i tend toward believing in the tooth faerie."
    Posted by Jonas on "Coffee with Supergirl" by TropicalSnowstorm
  • "i'm sometimes not so good at commenting. all i can do is break it down very basically: you made me intimate with the concept of 'empty space' in a very moving and unique way... i will think now. thank you."
    Posted by Jonas on "empty space" by TropicalSnowstorm
  • "sometimes i neglect to read you because you are so assuredly talented that though always impressed i'm never surprised... that's a stupid thought, i realize. god this is good."
    Posted by Jonas on "Caca de Maimutza" by TropicalSnowstorm
  • "i find that all i can really say to you is that i was here i read this and was moved enough to tell you so... beautiful lonesome piece."
    Posted by Jonas on "Popcorn sandals" by TropicalSnowstorm
  • "thoughts that interest me; your newly subjectified reality of what america is. beautifully, rather 'quietly' and thoughtfully rendered, particularly the string of adjectives in the last stanza."
    Posted by Jonas on "Homecoming vs. Dying Thoughts" by TropicalSnowstorm
  • "the nature of the people/the nature of the leaders/the nature that is human/the dichotomy of the creatures"
    Posted by Jonas on "Red Vest" by TropicalSnowstorm
  • "i really like the way you've presented this... kind of a sadist that enjoys the beauty of truth elicted by duress rather than the suffering in general... tearing holes in the comfortable lies the woman in question has set as mantra"
    Posted by Jonas on "Sugar Pastry and Cigarette Ash" by TropicalSnowstorm
  • "the truth comes out only sometimes when it's hard to hide when the twists of the innards tangle into knots and it's hard to make sense of what you're supposed to be... fakery... it's something that's hard to stand..."
    Posted by Jonas on "Sugar Pastry and Cigarette Ash" by TropicalSnowstorm
  • "i can feel the emotion and tired, tear-stained weariness come off of this piece... and the sighed word that comes to mind is: 'women'"
    Posted by Jonas on "Glade Plug-ins" by TropicalSnowstorm
  • "*sigh* ... and i feel as if a great weight has been lifted, and though this lack of gravity scares me, the lack of cavity invigorates a mind that wants to hope for love's victory, by a two touchdown spread."
    Posted by Jonas on "Ugly roses" by TropicalSnowstorm
  • "i agree w/ liquid as far as 'compulsory' goes. otherwise: life is about the journey isn't it... i wonder at how i forget this, always looking for a place to go, to call home."
    Posted by Jonas on "Mandatory Migration" by TropicalSnowstorm
  • "re-read, and felt anew... monday... today is monday, this is why i chose this poem to read... and now instead of the earlier lines i feel: sips, no fill, breaths, no life... it is too true... i try to dive deep enough, not fly high enough."
    Posted by Jonas on "Monday" by TropicalSnowstorm
  • "the simple musings of time that lies downstream... downstream you're sure it'll keep on flowing in some way regardless of our conceited perceptions of what reality is and isn't... time is dusty in this space."
    Posted by Jonas on "Heavy Eyelids and Sweaty Palms" by TropicalSnowstorm
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