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"YES...FOR THOSE WHO UNDERSTAND THIS DARKNESS, THEY ALSO KNOW THAT THERE IS A LOVE HERE THST IS UNKNOWN TO MOST, YET IT SOFTLY WHISPERS TO THOSE WHO DO....BEAUTIFUL WRITE HERE..ENJOYED....13....PRIEST......"
Posted by 13sonsofgod on "Dark Temptation" by Intoxicating Delirium

"I'LL STAY HERE UNTIL I CAN FIND SOMETHING DARKER...BLACK....13......."
Posted by 13sonsofgod on "Black" by Intoxicating Delirium

"Wow! This is just dark and beautiful.. it touched something deep inside of me.. ;)"
Posted by Kirschmond on "Imagining the Sky" by Intoxicating Delirium

"I absolutely adore how you put to words how it feels to want to write but have nothing in mind that feels worthy. Itâ€™s a struggle I face from time to time.. and you so eloquently described it. Thank you for this."
Posted by fraildove on "My Unoriginality Is Exceptionally Depressing" by Intoxicating Delirium

"Black becomes you That must be black light Its blinding"
Posted by zebra black on "Black" by Intoxicating Delirium

"Awesome write! Love the suspense, I like being able to picture the killer's and the victim's perspective."
Posted by FearlessDragon on "Thorns On The Ground" by Intoxicating Delirium

"Excellent ink. As reader I could almost feel the room shrinking as I read. Well done. "
Posted by Adagios on "24" by Intoxicating Delirium

"That was outstanding. I understood the perspective quite soon, but the emotion was still compelling. Sometimes things cannot be fixed. I hope the sun shines on you today."
Posted by Scarrzz on "Imagining the Sky" by Intoxicating Delirium

"I have an affinity for the number twenty four since it's the day of my birth. Very nice work."
Posted by man of decay on "24" by Intoxicating Delirium

"Long long time since I've had a chance to read anything from you but as always I have really enjoyed your work. I finally finished baby doll three cant wait to see what you think"
Posted by darkheartmagic on "24" by Intoxicating Delirium

"Lovely write, enjoyed reading this very much and could relate to a lot of your words. "no one likes you when you're 23" just screamed in my head as I got to the last lines. Thanks for sharing this!"
Posted by Unknown on "24" by Intoxicating Delirium

"Ah the little white lies of a society with blinders on. Make no promises, accept no critique. Carpe Diem, little sister, Carpe Diem. Thank you for the hindsight."
Posted by Lab Rat on "24" by Intoxicating Delirium

"Oh girl.... Just wait till you hit 35! Hahaha! You are still so young. You have loads of time. Just be sure what you think you should accomplish is what YOU truly desire and not what you think you SHOULD be achieving. Follow your heart. Don't let people or the world out side put pressure on you. We all go at our own pace."
Posted by Lilith Black on "24" by Intoxicating Delirium

"Yep you determine your own fate, good write. Cheers"
Posted by dumbone on "24" by Intoxicating Delirium

"This made me chuckle.... I think it'd make far more impression if the digits in the title were transposed. Seriously, a pretty girl like you will find a fertile future, doubtless. Enjoy youth! "
Posted by The Dybbuk on "24" by Intoxicating Delirium

"Never thought a number could hold so much emotion. An even number at that. "
Posted by Commander_Cadaver on "24" by Intoxicating Delirium

"Something that can't can't be stopped....dreams. In very few words I loved this work"
Posted by darkheartmagic on "Dreams" by Intoxicating Delirium

"A broken heart is a terrible thing to wast, after all it was your tears he forced you to tast"
Posted by darkheartmagic on "Broken Heart" by Intoxicating Delirium

"I could say after reading many works from you that tis my favorite one, this will be book marked. I love the darkness of the child opening the door to what the darkness sings,"
Posted by darkheartmagic on "Dark Temptation" by Intoxicating Delirium

"Wow just wow........ Story telling is an amazing gift... Your words are quite amazing as you bring the reader myself into the story, loved this work"
Posted by darkheartmagic on "Haunted Forest, A Feast For Wolves" by Intoxicating Delirium

"I have come to realize that you are an amazing artist when it comes to words. I've been writing for over 20 years trying to perfect my skill, but within reading your works opens a New chapter in my thoughts. Great write keep up the good work"
Posted by darkheartmagic on "Falling" by Intoxicating Delirium

"The Black it comes to recreate the mind, the will we seperat "
Posted by darkheartmagic on "Black" by Intoxicating Delirium

"Another great write by you.....I tell my kids the same thing in which you just said in a comment to me.....I have a teenage boy and a 18 month old little girl. I want nothing more than them to not go threw what I have and still going threw. For the past two years I've been afraid to post anything new because as you should no every great story ends with a grave. Your poems are real raw and truthfull . that makes you a better writer than most. Keep true. Stories are only stories if the teller fantasies about there next word, remember that girl. Your poems will reach out and touch another if only you want it to."
Posted by darkheartmagic on "Imagining the Sky" by Intoxicating Delirium

"I love your words they make such great since to me. I've always tried to comment back on your work but with life sometimes it gets hard. With this poem it has touched me almost as I wrote it myself . I wish too I can rewrite the words on this page...... I just want to thank you for this read it's helped me to find myself again as a poet."
Posted by darkheartmagic on "My Unoriginality Is Exceptionally Depressing" by Intoxicating Delirium

"I really like the lines "I haven't quite reached That level of crazy Worthy of the key To my coveted switch I'm just another Shade of grey", you captured a lot with a few words there. I think this flowed very well and look forward to seeing more free verse from you. Nice job! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "My Unoriginality Is Exceptionally Depressing" by Intoxicating Delirium

"I have no idea what the comment under me is talking about. The poem is good and a release of expression. You were straight forward in your context and I can relate to this borderline insanity."
Posted by Unknown on "My Unoriginality Is Exceptionally Depressing" by Intoxicating Delirium

"You are a great writer.The same thing has happened to me, I was the guy who was concerned for a girl though and I couldn't move.I can relate to that type of desperation.10/10 "
Posted by Ortolan on "Imagining the Sky" by Intoxicating Delirium

"It seemed mostly rhymy, so it must have had rhythm or reason.I think it's great.Ty. "
Posted by Ortolan on "My Unoriginality Is Exceptionally Depressing" by Intoxicating Delirium

"After reading some of your poems I can tell that you're really talented, seriously, I like your style. "
Posted by heinzlet on "Imagining the Sky" by Intoxicating Delirium

""My need for surreality is fed by mediocrity" That's deep, I like it. At some point unoriginality makes us original, carves our way into, makes us eager to improve. "
Posted by heinzlet on "My Unoriginality Is Exceptionally Depressing" by Intoxicating Delirium

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