Comments by All Members
- "As if... peripheral cold stares... reflected in the window pane... not controlled... think they matter... judgmental bs... kindly, f#@% off! ...AND you're still ascending!
So raw, so realistic, so honest, it played like a movie in my head. "Bad Poetry", no way! I like this one. Bows-
~~Mike~~"
Posted by Peyton1 on "Bad poetry." by soul_versing
- "I like it.
Well seems you haven't writen here, new poetry...
In a very long time...
Since you have been apointed as my mentor...
I do hope... you return...
If possible.
And hope you are well.
Thank you."
Posted by Rock on "Bad poetry." by soul_versing
- "I dont address who I am in my waking life on this site much, as so much of what I am in broad daylight doesn’t relate to what I want to say here. However I am a licensed therapist who leans heavily on jungian concepts when working from a narrative therapy modality. I’d love to share this w some of my students, or a client or two when appropriate, if at all possible. it’s pure, and speaks purely to a space and time in some. I find this plainly relatable. Bravo for your courage, in either event, both in this and other works. "
Posted by Adagios on "Underneath The Awakening. Fighting the ego self." by soul_versing
- "their moments of collide. jesus. poignant and complete in just a few syllables. powerful "
Posted by Adagios on "111" by soul_versing
- "I like the picture and the words expressed, which I think work well together. I found the picture to soften and focus the words more toward a hopeful direction than they might have, as the flowers are doing what they were designed for and with it they bring peace. Ciao, Steve
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Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Heavy." by soul_versing
- "This piece had the sense of the profound hanging about it. I particularly loved the line, “I’m only flient in actions†- always a treat to see something new from you. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "~741 Hz~" by soul_versing
- "S.V. I read this piece several times but from the very first time I felt a sense of something beyond familial and was cemented with your profound epiphany "your words hold no meaning
I'm only fluent in actions" which stands extremely well as a self sustaining truth, but then you kindly deliver a tenet that I've found a great deal of comfort in and that's the idea that oppositions exist in perfect harmony without apology or explanation. I intuitively sense lesser beings cringe at this concept because they have a distorted vision of control not yet rectified by a particular lesson in sentience. Anyway I'm no sage, (although I sometimes play one in these forums),LOL I recognise in many of your works that I've pondered a larger sense of what it is to "be"... I found this work to have great form and presentation which delivered its message with thought and precision and i'm looking forward to more! ...tonebone"
Posted by tonebone on "~741 Hz~" by soul_versing
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