Comments by Peyton1
- "Very nice miss Caitlin, you had me thinking you were in a park until the secret was revealed. The next to last stanza got to me, so sad not getting to say goodbye. I enjoyed reading this one, the layout was great. Awesome write................... ~ACE~"
Posted by Peyton1 on "Imagining the Sky" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "What an excellent job you've done here miss Caitlin! Congratulations for winning the contest, a deserving write for sure. My pulse sped up with each stanza's finish. Thrilling, chilling, and quite fulfilling! I do enjoy the thrill of each hunt you take us on, very nice indeed. You simply must post more often, your works are much enjoyed. Thanks for writing...."
Posted by Peyton1 on "Haunted Forest, A Feast For Wolves" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "Sounds like the original picture was nearly destroyed. Maybe my 4 step program will work for you. 1- Close your eyes (no peeking!), 2- Memorize the current shape of each piece, 3- (seriously, no peeking now) Envision each of the pieces as you carefully fit them together, 4- Open your eyes and admire the wonderful NEW picture you have created!! Viola, puzzle solved. Glad to see ya back with us miss Caitlin! Enjoyed reading you again..."
Posted by Peyton1 on "Puzzle Without A Picture " by Intoxicating Delirium
- "Aaahhhh, the fear, the thrill of the hunt! I absolutely loved you using insanity as the monster....very nicely done!! The flow was captivating and easy to follow, it unfolded beautifully, loved it! Your rhyme scheme was WONDERFUL. They say there's two sides to every story. Here's how to break it down. Read the 1st and 3rd lines, then the 2nd and 4th lines of each paragraph. Voila! two stories become one. The secret lies in the intertwining.......Excellent job, I love this writing style. YOU, my dear, are truly talented!!! (That's what I got from it.....)"
Posted by Peyton1 on "Thorns On The Ground" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "Thank you for sharing that, now I know I'm not the only one. This one hit me close to the heart, I won't lie, I started to tear up...wow! You said it perfectly."
Posted by Peyton1 on "Picture" by Intoxicating Delirium
- "Marvelous piece of work! This easy flow and rhyme is why I love poetry. A short piece that tempts you to see the story that could unfold, I absolutely love this! I can't wait to read more. Might you continue this story for us at some point? It would interest me to see where you would take her. I have trouble keeping a poem short, once I start my mind just explodes and the pen struggles to keep up. Thanks for writing this enjoyable poem!"
Posted by Peyton1 on "Dark Temptation" by Intoxicating Delirium
